Raelea's First Writing Assignment

Raelea is now in first grade. I'm bound and determined to do a better job of teaching writing to my younger kids than I did with my older kids.   So, Raelea has now composed her very first story.  I thought I would share it with you all.

The Big Fish
A person was holding a fishing pole.  A person saw her bobber get pulled down.  Once she wound the line in, there was a fish that was 180 feet long.  The person's name was Raelea.  She took the fish and put it in a cooler that was 180 feet long.  She took it home and ate it for dinner.    
The end.